Monday, June 13, 2011

Assignment Week #16

The Dark master’s
Challenge
Intro:  these two kids named Dennis and randy are addicted to video games and randy came home with a video game that he got from a mysterious store.
Rising action: when they put the disc in the cd rom a pale white face appeared saying “do you dare to enter this realm”
Climax: they entered this real and as soon as they got out a mummy started attacking them so they ran away trying to look for a way out but it was like 3 miles away and randy was scared of mouse’s.
Falling action: they go into this mysterious room and 4 knights one black, one yellow, one red and one green they were just about to get trapped then…
Conclusion: Dennis thought about something but she thought it would not work she thought it was to cheesy to work but since the mouse had crawled up her leg she picked it up and pointed at the red knight and made clicking noises then all of a sudden in a flash they were back in there room.

Married to a Murderer Short Story Mystery with Romance by Alan Russell
plot profile:http://discuss.mysterynet.com/scripts/discuss?14@@.ee6d36a
introduction: this story begins with danielle a very rich girl but she liked having relationships with
prisoners Not that Danielle thought she had much in common with other outmates. Most of them she
considered pathetic, women with no self-esteem. As she saw it, their relationships with prison inmates
offered them little more than a perverse nunnery.
Rising action: since Danielle liked having relationships with prisoners that would mean she would know
All the bad things they have done in their life, this guy she had liked named Clay Potter did was accused
Of really bad things like murder but Danielle did not care what he did. Clay had been accused of
Murdering a family. But he had told Danielle the real story.
Climax: since Danielle likes prisoners she decides to marry one and they get married even know he has a death penalty for his crimes so Daniel only has 10 days with him. So Danielle try’s her hardest to get his death penalty avoided. She is totally in love with this man and would never give him up even know they didn’t ever go out or anything because he was in jail.
Falling action: Danielle could not avoid the death penalty and Clay Potter had to die even know he was innocent. He told Danielle the actual story but no one else believed him. Everyone always whispered behind her back “married to a murderer” but for some reason she liked it.

the book i have been reading has gotten really boring i have finished it and i think they put the story way to long its a 850 page book and they just put way to much story line like they didnt get to the point quickly they spent like 3 pages trying to get to it. I was pretty mad because i hate when i spend so much time reading a book but then in the end it is like the worst book in the world.

i rate this book out of all a 3 because i think if it was a 400 page book they could get you hooked into it and thats like taking half the book away and thats how much i think was a waste.